Okay, you asked

On your heads be it.

The ST:Voy story was meant to be a rewriting of the entire third season. Back when Voyager was actually still worth watching. However, I only got so far and then lost interest. Part of it was that Voyager was sucking badly at the time and it was hard to keep the enthusiasm going. In addition, I knew that if I was going to finish the story it would need some heavy rewriting.

The first part of the story, which some of you have seen before, badly needs tightening up to incorporate editorial comments. Also, Tom is rather pathetic in this and needs a spinal cord injection. And, can we say cliche alert? *g* I think you'll all know when.

Oh, and it doesn't have a title. I never got round to thinking of one.

( Those who are brave enter here )

C/P story part 2

I'm having to make several posts as it's too big to fit in one.

( Read more... )

C/P story part 3

And there's more

( Read more... )

C/P story part 4

And more...

( Chapter 4 )

C/P story part 5

And there's no escape.

( Chapter 5 )

C/P story part 6

You're doomed, you're all doomed...

( Chapter 6 )

C/P story part 7

Is there no end to this rubbish?

( Chapter 7 )

C/P story (almost) last part

Nearly there.

( Next to last part )

C/P story - absolutely the last part

Enormous sighs of relief all round...

( Yes, it's the end! Of the WIP, anyway. )